Summary
In the article "Who is the true enemy of the
internet? Russia, China or the US?” Morozov (2015) asserts that, contrary to
popular belief, the US has infringed the autonomy of the Internet. The
widespread reliance on the Internet has allowed technological companies access
to vast amount of information. Reacting to the phenomenon, states have imposed
various degrees of censorship. This infringement of human rights has been criticized,
even by the US. Yet actions by the US, to claims rights to data processed by
American companies, undermine its integrity.
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Reviewed by Ivy, Weili and Russell
ReplyDeleteContent:
-No reference
-Main idea unclear (does autonomy of Internet = freedom of Internet?)
-Ambiguous use of human rights (Which rights are you talking about?)
-"This infringement of human rights" & "technological companies": by who/which country?
-"States have imposed": is states the same as country (may lead reader to think that you are only talking about US states)? Not all states imposes.
-Consistency of using US/American
-Author/writer ideas not clearly defined/separated
Language:
-to claim(s) rights