In the article "Who is the true enemy of the
internet? Russia, China or the US?” Morozov (2015) asserts that, contrary to
popular belief, the US has infringed on the autonomy of the Internet. The
widespread reliance on the Internet has given technological companies access to
vast amount of information. Reacting to this phenomenon, states have imposed
various degrees of censorship. This infringement of human rights has been
criticised, even by the US. Yet actions by the US, which claim rights to all
data processed by American companies, undermine its integrity. As countries
compete in staking their dominance in the cyber-world, the Internet will not be neutral.
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Morozov (2015) was right in claiming that all nation states have interest in wanting to restrict the freedom of the Internet. Yet the neutrality of the Internet was and will never be possible. A neutral internet is one that is both unregulated and free from any form of surveillance. Such characteristics clash with the interest of governments, companies and even society. For reasons such as national and internal security, governments are often motivated to restrict and in other cases monitor their citizen’s usage of the Internet. Similarly for companies, who invest a great amount of capital in building infrastructure, it is in their interest that the Internet be regulated so as to recoup cost and increase profits. Given such a relationship, it impossible that the Internet can remain as a free agent.
While the Internet has been lauded to be the
greatest social mobiliser of our time, it does has its fair share of woes. Stability
is imperative to any government, especially for countries with many ethnic
groups. Maintaining peaceful relations between the various ethnic groups has and
will continue to be a problem that plagues governance. This view
resonates with the author. In his
article, he asserts that the raison d’être for Russian and Chinese’s censorship
is primarily for preventing social unrest (Morozov, 2015). The Internet in this
aspect acts as a double-edged sword and, if not handled carefully can result in
social anarchy. Traditionally, ethnic laws that are in place, serve to enforce
social cohesion. However, the Internet has hampered enforcement efforts.
Technological advancement has allowed for exchanges to occur between
individuals at an unprecedented scale, albeit one that occurs many a times in
anonymity. Anonymity over the net has created leeway, for radical individuals
to trespass the boundaries of the law. The symbiotic relationship between law
enforcers and individuals has drastically changed. By regulating the Internet allows them to regain control over their citizens and
gives them the option to intervene before any tensions escalate. The “Great
Firewall of China” is one of the more prominent examples, which showcases how
the Chinese government, through the use of censorship, maintained stability
within a country that has 56 official ethnic groups.
Another major concern of nation-states is that of
sovereign integrity. In today’s globalised world, the idea of autarky seems absurd
and foreign to many. Most countries today are complexly intertwined into the
global system via international organisations and international trade. This has
redefined how states view their security boundaries. Morozov (2015) claimed
that actions by the US to extend control over data processed by the
technological companies would exacerbate censorship practices by the Russians
and Chinese. The Guardian (2014) reports that spying has been an age-old
practice between states, but the Internet has revolutionised the way and scale
of this practice. Countries, while trying to obtain strategic advantage over
each other, practice hacking and spying over the net. No state will abolish spying
activities, for the sake of “human rights”. To countries, national security
takes precedence over the need to respect human rights. Edward Snowden’s
shocking revelation of NSA’s global surveillance aptly illustrates the point.
The US had monitored calls of 35 world leaders, to obtain strategic
intelligence from both its allies and enemies (Guardian, 2013).
Snowden’s revelation also revealed cosy relations
that existed between technological companies and the US. Why would companies
that are predominantly concern about profits bother with data that is exchanged
over the net? Chambers (2015) at the
Davos World Economic Forum valued the Internet industry at US$19 trillion. He
also accurately postulated at the same conference a year ago, in a speech
titled “The Internet Of Everything”, the ubiquitous role of the Internet in
daily life. Morozov shared his view by attributing the over reliance on the
convenience brought by the Internet, as an inducement for government
surveillance and censorship. Today it is unimaginable to carry out daily activities
without the usage of the Internet. Yet the cost of such usage has been
relatively affordable for the general public. This is incompatible with high
set up cost that is incurred by Internet service providers (ISP), who spend
billions on laying the infrastructure for Internet connection (white house,
2011). For the accounts to balance, technological companies have improvised an
ingenious method, of selling data. Companies globally are always interested
with consumption habits. Many will gladly pay a premium for such information; Forbes
(2012) has estimated the data mining industry to be worth $50 billion USD by
2017. ISPs have also turned to the regulation of Internet broadband speeds as a
form of income generation. This allows ISPs to charge a premium to consumers or
companies who wish to enjoy a faster experience (white house, n.d.). Creating
and maintaining the Internet came at a costly price, and it is in these companies
greatest interest to regulate it. As long as companies continue to be profit
oriented, the future of Internet neutrality is bleak.
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Thesis statement: a little unsure what you meant by ‘…states have interest in wanting to restrict the freedom of the Internet.’ For whose interest is it? The other paragraphs don't seem to flow with your thesis statement as well
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- Be careful with the use of commas eg.
-> ‘Similarly for companies, who invest a great amount of capital in building infrastructure, it is in their interest’ Put a comma after ‘similarly’ and remove the comma after ‘companies’
-> 3rd para: ‘groups is and will continue to be’ commas after ‘is’ and after ‘be’
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- 3rd para: Your main point is stated in the middle of the paragraph ‘… ethnic laws that are in place, serve to enforce social cohesion. However, the Internet has hampered enforcement efforts’. We suggest you put this at the front of the paragraph to clarify what this paragraph is about.
Generally, your essay is quite well written up with good support from other references.
This is a richly detailed, interesting reader response, Boon Siang. You do a fine job summarizing the original, and you then provide an in-depth discussion of your stand in regard to Morozov's ideas. I do have a few questions/comments though:
ReplyDeleteYou write that "Similarly for companies, who invest a great amount of capital in building infrastructure, it is in their interest that the Internet be regulated so as to recoup cost and increase profits." I don't feel that you explain that.
You say that the Internet is a "free agent"? Do you support that throughout?
What is your concluding statement?
(Don't fret so much about the work limit --- up to 900 or so.)
Language issues include:
--- Yet the neutrality of the Internet was and will never be possible. >>> Yet the neutrality of the Internet was NOT and will never be possible. : Do you see why this is required?
--- it does has >
--- The Internet in this aspect acts as a double-edged sword and, if not handled carefully can result in social anarchy. Traditionally, ethnic laws that are in place, serve to enforce social cohesion.
Anonymity over the net has created leeway, for radical individuals to trespass the boundaries of the law.
> (problems with commas) See the OWL from Purdue for a better understanding. https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/596/01/ &
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/owlprint/607/
--- The US had monitored calls of 35 world leaders, to obtain strategic intelligence from both its allies and enemies (Guardian, 2013). >>> correct citation?
Also, are your reporting verbs all in the present tense?
I appreciate your trying to reduce the # of words. Thanks!
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